While the overall application is good, we feel like the personality is a little sparse. You touch on Bakura's friendliness well, but what about the other facets of his personality? How does he react to his friends being threatened? How does he treat strangers? Those are just a few ideas; we'd like to see more about him!

If you'll respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You have until 7/3. Thank you!