While the overall application has a lot of accurate points, we would like to see a revised or expanded personality section. What you have is accurate, but doesn't quite match up with his chosen canon point of post Avengers, as he goes through quite a bit of development between the two separate movies. Expand on his development up to the selected canon point so that we have an accurate picture of how you intend to portray him. Also, expand a little on the personality points in general. For instance, it's mentioned that Loki is insecure but doesn't show it-- then how does he show it? Tell us more about him. Don't just say how he is--give examples of how he reacts in situations. This is your chance to make him shine, so we would like to know more about him!
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Revision
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Re: Revision
I overhauled the personality section and changed a few other notes on his history and powers. I hope I did it right this time.
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