While the overall application is good, we feel like the personality is a little sparse. You touch on Bakura's friendliness well, but what about the other facets of his personality? How does he react to his friends being threatened? How does he treat strangers? Those are just a few ideas; we'd like to see more about him!
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http://doormat-hikari.dreamwidth.org/396.html added stuff. rearranged a few things. added more strengths/weaknesses too. He's not a major character (his shadow instead is) so I fleshed out everything I could :)
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Wavering
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Re: Wavering
added stuff. rearranged a few things. added more strengths/weaknesses too. He's not a major character (his shadow instead is) so I fleshed out everything I could :)
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