[ Strengths/Weaknesses ] : -Codependent; but she's working on it -Self confidence issues -Some trust issues too +Loyality +Detemined +Willing to be honest with herself +/- Desire to protect; she is willing to kill herself for the sake of protecting others [ Other Important Facts ] : Shirley is a Ferines, so it means that she is able to read the language of her people very easily. Although since she's living with her friends, finding things with her language is pretty rare. When something does show up with the Ferines language, then she'll read it.
Shirley is a crystal eren, so it means that she is mostly a spell caster. She can heal, protect, help, and is able to do heavy damage with her spells with her quil. Yes, she uses a quil. It should be noted that most, if not all, her spells are usually pink.
[ Sample ] : It was rather odd that Shirley found herself in some strange underwater city. She was certain that right before waking up, she was screaming “CHARGE!” at the top of her lungs before she passed out. Just what was going on? At first, she thought that Norma or Moses might be pulling a prank on her but she doubts that they could pull off something this...elaborate. Was this another kidnapping? Perhaps, she thought to herself, but there weren't any guards around nor were there any dungeons? Might this be a trap for the others to follow through? It could be but why an underwater place?
As Shirley thought some more, she knew that she couldn't stay in place for long. She felt a sneeze coming and she couldn't sit around for the others to rescue her. If she could rescue herself, then the others won't have to get hurt. As she continued to look around, another thought came up. Was this another Ferines village? That was certainly a possiblity but it was certainly something she never seen before. Besides, something...felt off. If this were a village, then why would there be builings similar to the ones she saw at Wertis Beacon. There were so many questions to ask and she wasn't sure where to start. However, now that she finally figured out a couple of things, maybe she can get out of this place and find Senel before he gets himself in trouble.
While the overall application is good, we would like to see a revised sample. We would like to see a sample that better portrays her voice and how you intend to play her in Vatheon.
If you'll respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP. You have until 7/7. Thank you!
[As the feed turns on, Shirley begins talking with a smile]
Um, excuse me, would anyone here mind a spar with me? I don't want to hurt anyone but ...I think it's been a while since I last fought someone. I'm a Crystal Eren so that means I'm not a physical fighter...
[After a couple of seconds, Shirley thought about it some more]
Actually, I want to ask, would anyone mind teaching me how to fight using a sword or your fists? I think I might need some help training a bit.
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[ Strengths/Weaknesses ] :
-Codependent; but she's working on it
-Self confidence issues
-Some trust issues too
+Loyality
+Detemined
+Willing to be honest with herself
+/- Desire to protect; she is willing to kill herself for the sake of protecting others
[ Other Important Facts ] :
Shirley is a Ferines, so it means that she is able to read the language of her people very easily. Although since she's living with her friends, finding things with her language is pretty rare. When something does show up with the Ferines language, then she'll read it.
Shirley is a crystal eren, so it means that she is mostly a spell caster. She can heal, protect, help, and is able to do heavy damage with her spells with her quil. Yes, she uses a quil. It should be noted that most, if not all, her spells are usually pink.
Here are a list of her artes
[ Sample ] :
It was rather odd that Shirley found herself in some strange underwater city. She was certain that right before waking up, she was screaming “CHARGE!” at the top of her lungs before she passed out. Just what was going on? At first, she thought that Norma or Moses might be pulling a prank on her but she doubts that they could pull off something this...elaborate. Was this another kidnapping? Perhaps, she thought to herself, but there weren't any guards around nor were there any dungeons? Might this be a trap for the others to follow through? It could be but why an underwater place?
As Shirley thought some more, she knew that she couldn't stay in place for long. She felt a sneeze coming and she couldn't sit around for the others to rescue her. If she could rescue herself, then the others won't have to get hurt. As she continued to look around, another thought came up. Was this another Ferines village? That was certainly a possiblity but it was certainly something she never seen before. Besides, something...felt off. If this were a village, then why would there be builings similar to the ones she saw at Wertis Beacon. There were so many questions to ask and she wasn't sure where to start. However, now that she finally figured out a couple of things, maybe she can get out of this place and find Senel before he gets himself in trouble.
[ Questions? Comments? Concerns? ] : Noppeee
WAVERING
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Re: WAVERING
[As the feed turns on, Shirley begins talking with a smile]
Um, excuse me, would anyone here mind a spar with me? I don't want to hurt anyone but ...I think it's been a while since I last fought someone. I'm a Crystal Eren so that means I'm not a physical fighter...
[After a couple of seconds, Shirley thought about it some more]
Actually, I want to ask, would anyone mind teaching me how to fight using a sword or your fists? I think I might need some help training a bit.
And I hope that these are good
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If you have any further questions or comments, please head over to the f.a.q.
Congratulations again, and we hope you enjoy the swim!