While the overall application so far was good, we would like to request an extended personality sample. We know you are apping him pre-series, and we agree with your reasoning for doing so, but we would like some more insight in how Vegeta acts and develops along the course of the canon as a guideline for how he could develop in vatheon.
If you respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You'll have until 01/31.
As for your question, Vatheon does have a moon, but its rays would only affect him while he is up on the island. The rays cannot really penetrate to that degree down to the depths at which Vatheon lies. So, you are always free to have him transform, just make sure he goes stomping around up above and not down below!
Vegeta tsunned all the way through this, denying that he has anything to overcome emotionally
Over the course of the series, Vegeta slowly begins to soften. He learns that standing alone is not necessarily the best course of action, and that he doesn't need to be fighting all the time. It's okay (good, even!) to have someone to watch your back. He even learns to love and has a family that he cares for deeply. This development is likely bolstered by the defeat of Frieza, and I'm unsure how much Vegeta can progress without Frieza being addressed. Vegeta goes as far to say that Frieza made him who he is. It is heavily implied that he does not want to be the person he's become - he's in tears when he confesses that to Goku. Ideally, I would like one of Vatheon's ultimate Care Bears to start Vegeta along the path of forgiving himself. If he could learn camaraderie (as opposed to just, you know, blowing failures like Nappa up), I think that would go a long way, too.
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If you respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You'll have until 01/31.
As for your question, Vatheon does have a moon, but its rays would only affect him while he is up on the island. The rays cannot really penetrate to that degree down to the depths at which Vatheon lies. So, you are always free to have him transform, just make sure he goes stomping around up above and not down below!
Vegeta tsunned all the way through this, denying that he has anything to overcome emotionally
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☆ Reread the rules and premise for a refresher.
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☆ Introduce yourself over at
☆ Game chat is on AIM, group name vatheon. Information about it can be found on the game's ooc community.
☆ While not required, it is highly suggested that you set up a Voicemail entry for your character. Be sure to use the ‘date out of order’ option!
If you have any further questions or comments, please head over to the f.a.q.
Congratulations again, and we hope you enjoy the swim!