While the overall application has a lot of points, we would like to see a revised or expanded personality section. The current personality section reads a lot more like a history focused from points of personality, so we would like to request a little elaboration. While what you have is perfectly accurate, we would like to know more! Tell us more about him-- specifically, more about his personality and character. This is your chance to make him shine, so we would like to know more about him!
If you'll respond to this with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You have until 5/30.
After thinking over how active I could keep this guy in Vatheon, over the last few days, I've decided to pull this app out, because while I could likely make ac with the man at first, after the initial entry posts and such, he'd likely go down hill from there, so going to nip this in the bud here before it happens. Instead, I'm going to focus on the other reserve I have, since I have much more confidence in that muse being active in the game.
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If you'll respond to this with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You have until 5/30.
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