While the overall application so far was good, we would like to request a revised personality section along with a new sample. Specifically-- how does he use his intelligence and how does his thought process operate? Tell us more about him. Don't just say how he is--give examples of how he reacts in situations.
It is difficult to get a grasp of his voice and inner workings from the current sample--we would like a new one more focused on his thought process to get a better idea of how you intend to play him.
If you respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You'll have until 08/29.
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Aizen Sosuke | Bleach | Reserved
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It is difficult to get a grasp of his voice and inner workings from the current sample--we would like a new one more focused on his thought process to get a better idea of how you intend to play him.
If you respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You'll have until 08/29.
I hope I got it right...
ACCEPTED
Now that you're in the game, please follow the next few house-keeping steps.
☆ Comment here: #-H, I-Q or R-Z on the Taken Characters post.
☆ Join
☆ Add your information here at the Player Contact page.
☆ Reread the rules and premise for a refresher.
☆ A list of permissions posts for the characters of the game can be found here. Please take a look at the posts there, and if you need a permissions post for your character, don’t forget to post a link there!
☆ Introduce yourself over at
☆ Game chat is on AIM, group name vatheon. Information about it can be found on the game's ooc community.
☆ Feel free to follow the mod plurk for notifications on updates, events, and more:
☆ While not required, it is highly suggested that you set up a Voicemail entry for your character. Be sure to use the ‘date out of order’ option!
If you have any further questions or comments, please head over to the f.a.q.
Congratulations again, and we hope you enjoy the swim!
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