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thalassino ([personal profile] thalassino) wrote 2012-10-04 04:18 am (UTC)

DECLINED

☆ Declined - - -

We're sorry, but at this time we will have to decline your application.

The entirety of the application is sparse, and gives a very basic and disorganized synopsis of Arche's character; while you've touched on some surface qualities, there is a lot of inner motivation and explanations missing (why she is the way she is), enough that it does not properly flesh her out as one of the main characters of the canon.

Overall, it doesn't seem as if the application shows your knowledge of character well enough and we'll have to deny it. We suggest trying again next app round after a thorough (and complete) canon review. Thank you for considering us!

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