While your application as a whole is accurate and well-written, we would like to ask for a revision on your personality section. The majority of it read too much like a history section for us to get good insight into Rue's current personality and your understanding of it. While her past is important, we would like to see more of a clarification on how the events of her past shape her currently, now that everything has come and gone.
If you respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You have until 05/06.
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While your application as a whole is accurate and well-written, we would like to ask for a revision on your personality section. The majority of it read too much like a history section for us to get good insight into Rue's current personality and your understanding of it. While her past is important, we would like to see more of a clarification on how the events of her past shape her currently, now that everything has come and gone.
If you respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You have until 05/06.