one sample can be found here but it's a little too short, I guess...
I hope this will be better:
“Um... Excuse me.” Dizzy approached the nearest person she’s seen. She looked confused and everyone would be able to notice she was new here. “It would seem I got lost. Perhaps you could tell me where am I now?”
She made a troubled look.
“I was sure I got back to May and everyone. Oh!” She looked hopeful now. “Maybe you’ve seen May? Um, she’s a very cheerful girl. And she carries an anchor around. I hope I did not worried her and Johnny...”
She looked worried now. She finally managed to go back to her friends and now she was lost again. But unlike earlier, the Gear did not know how she got here in the first place.
“...I wonder what happened. I do not seem to recall anything.”
I hope this will be better:
“Um... Excuse me.” Dizzy approached the nearest person she’s seen. She looked confused and everyone would be able to notice she was new here. “It would seem I got lost. Perhaps you could tell me where am I now?”
She made a troubled look.
“I was sure I got back to May and everyone. Oh!” She looked hopeful now. “Maybe you’ve seen May? Um, she’s a very cheerful girl. And she carries an anchor around. I hope I did not worried her and Johnny...”
She looked worried now. She finally managed to go back to her friends and now she was lost again. But unlike earlier, the Gear did not know how she got here in the first place.
“...I wonder what happened. I do not seem to recall anything.”
[ Player Name ] : Mandie
[ Personal DW ] : N/A
[ Age ] : Forever 25, please disregard recent birthday as it did not happen
[ Timezone ] : Central
[ Other Characters ] : Zelda, Ion
[ Character's Name ] : Vegeta
[ Character's Age ] : 19
[ Series ] : Dragonball Z
[ Canon Point ] : Pre-DBZ
[ History ] :
Vegeta's History
Vegeta is currently a subordinate of Frieza and none too happy about it. His main job is to subjugate other planets and entertain his oh-so-gracious master.
[ Personal DW ] : N/A
[ Age ] : Forever 25, please disregard recent birthday as it did not happen
[ Timezone ] : Central
[ Other Characters ] : Zelda, Ion
[ Character's Name ] : Vegeta
[ Character's Age ] : 19
[ Series ] : Dragonball Z
[ Canon Point ] : Pre-DBZ
[ History ] :
Vegeta's History
Vegeta is currently a subordinate of Frieza and none too happy about it. His main job is to subjugate other planets and entertain his oh-so-gracious master.
[ Personality ] :
To put it simply, Vegeta is an arrogant prick. He is quite convinced of his Saiyan superiority and doesn't allow anyone beneath him to say otherwise. He doesn't hesitate to dispose of people who displease him, and he is easily angered when others refuse to acknowledge him.
He is not without restraint, however. If someone far outclasses Vegeta's strength, he will keep quiet. He is well aware of Frieza's great power and does not talk back to his face, though he plans to kill Frieza someday. Until then, Vegeta simply waits, taking on the hardest missions possible in an attempt to gain strength and maybe, someday, unravel the mystery of the legend of the Super Saiyan. His patience on this front is seemingly endless.
Vegeta's loyalty is a hard thing to win, but if someone does manage to truly befriend him, he is steadfast in his defense of them. It's likely he would even willingly sacrifice his life for a loved one (as in the Buu saga, though that hasn't happened to our little Vegeta yet!). He is private with his emotions and doesn't often express concern for others, pushing them away if he feels that they are getting too close. The young Vegeta has separated himself positive emotions like friendship and love, but he still possesses the capacity for those feelings. This is likely because Frieza told him not to become too attached to any pets and he fears for the safety of anyone he gets close to.
[ Strengths/Weaknesses ] :
Physical strengths:
* If he recovers, being hurt only makes him stronger
* Can survive under ridiculous amounts of gravity, can go without breathing for a long time, not much affected by temperature.
* He's Saiyan. That covers it if you know what a Saiyan is.
Emotional strengths:
* Determined
* Nearly unbreakable mind - years and years under Frieza, and he never broke down and cried until his death.
* Extremely loyal
* Intelligent
* Fearless - what's left to lose?
Physical weaknesses:
* Next to none. If it's a physical attack, he can adapt to it eventually. Saiyans have an exceptional immune system as well. Considering their eating habits, it's probably a survival mechanism. However, to keep him in balance somewhat...
* Magic. Vegeta has never encountered it. He will have no idea what to do with it and will be more vulnerable to that sort of attack. It is unlikely that he will develop much of a defense against magic.
* And of course, his tail. It's extremely sensitive. He keeps it coiled tightly around his waist usually.
Emotional weaknesses:
* Paranoia - Vegeta is convinced that everything is some plot of Frieza's.
* Loneliness - Most of his race is dead and any friends he makes are killed by the overlord
* Temper - Vegeta's temper is explosive and he's young enough that he can't always control it. It makes him sloppy in fights from time to time.
* Pride - Vegeta is too prideful to sincerely ask for help. He would have to be at the end of his life to lower himself to that. Ordering people to do his bidding, on the other hand, is another matter entirely.
[ Other Important Facts ] :
Saiyans transform upon seeing the full moon. Their moods may also be somewhat dependant on the cycle of the moon.
[ Sample ] :
Vegeta, prince of all Saiyans, was lost. His scouter kept telling him that it was out of range and he felt the urge to crush the damn thing, but that could turn out badly if he was far enough from another habitable planet that he would need someone to pick him up.
No, it was better to survey his surroundings.
This place was nothing like the pathetic planet he had been sent to enslave. They certainly didn't have technology advanced enough to build a city underwater, and - he jumped just to test it - the gravity was lighter, here. He fluffed his tail up in irritation. If he had no idea where he was, he couldn't be too forceful with gathering information. There was no way to tell who had favor with Frieza. He would have to play nicely.
"You," he barked at the nearest person. "What is this place?"
There. Perfectly nice. He hadn't even hit them.
To put it simply, Vegeta is an arrogant prick. He is quite convinced of his Saiyan superiority and doesn't allow anyone beneath him to say otherwise. He doesn't hesitate to dispose of people who displease him, and he is easily angered when others refuse to acknowledge him.
He is not without restraint, however. If someone far outclasses Vegeta's strength, he will keep quiet. He is well aware of Frieza's great power and does not talk back to his face, though he plans to kill Frieza someday. Until then, Vegeta simply waits, taking on the hardest missions possible in an attempt to gain strength and maybe, someday, unravel the mystery of the legend of the Super Saiyan. His patience on this front is seemingly endless.
Vegeta's loyalty is a hard thing to win, but if someone does manage to truly befriend him, he is steadfast in his defense of them. It's likely he would even willingly sacrifice his life for a loved one (as in the Buu saga, though that hasn't happened to our little Vegeta yet!). He is private with his emotions and doesn't often express concern for others, pushing them away if he feels that they are getting too close. The young Vegeta has separated himself positive emotions like friendship and love, but he still possesses the capacity for those feelings. This is likely because Frieza told him not to become too attached to any pets and he fears for the safety of anyone he gets close to.
[ Strengths/Weaknesses ] :
Physical strengths:
* If he recovers, being hurt only makes him stronger
* Can survive under ridiculous amounts of gravity, can go without breathing for a long time, not much affected by temperature.
* He's Saiyan. That covers it if you know what a Saiyan is.
Emotional strengths:
* Determined
* Nearly unbreakable mind - years and years under Frieza, and he never broke down and cried until his death.
* Extremely loyal
* Intelligent
* Fearless - what's left to lose?
Physical weaknesses:
* Next to none. If it's a physical attack, he can adapt to it eventually. Saiyans have an exceptional immune system as well. Considering their eating habits, it's probably a survival mechanism. However, to keep him in balance somewhat...
* Magic. Vegeta has never encountered it. He will have no idea what to do with it and will be more vulnerable to that sort of attack. It is unlikely that he will develop much of a defense against magic.
* And of course, his tail. It's extremely sensitive. He keeps it coiled tightly around his waist usually.
Emotional weaknesses:
* Paranoia - Vegeta is convinced that everything is some plot of Frieza's.
* Loneliness - Most of his race is dead and any friends he makes are killed by the overlord
* Temper - Vegeta's temper is explosive and he's young enough that he can't always control it. It makes him sloppy in fights from time to time.
* Pride - Vegeta is too prideful to sincerely ask for help. He would have to be at the end of his life to lower himself to that. Ordering people to do his bidding, on the other hand, is another matter entirely.
[ Other Important Facts ] :
Saiyans transform upon seeing the full moon. Their moods may also be somewhat dependant on the cycle of the moon.
[ Sample ] :
Vegeta, prince of all Saiyans, was lost. His scouter kept telling him that it was out of range and he felt the urge to crush the damn thing, but that could turn out badly if he was far enough from another habitable planet that he would need someone to pick him up.
No, it was better to survey his surroundings.
This place was nothing like the pathetic planet he had been sent to enslave. They certainly didn't have technology advanced enough to build a city underwater, and - he jumped just to test it - the gravity was lighter, here. He fluffed his tail up in irritation. If he had no idea where he was, he couldn't be too forceful with gathering information. There was no way to tell who had favor with Frieza. He would have to play nicely.
"You," he barked at the nearest person. "What is this place?"
There. Perfectly nice. He hadn't even hit them.
[ Questions? Comments? Concerns? ] :
Just as a note on this application - I will be pulling Vegeta from BEFORE the events of DBZ to avoid some of the incredible power issues I think might be present otherwise. He's likely to grow stronger every time he gets himself beaten down since that's just how Saiyans work, but he won't be blowing up planets by farting on accident or anything ridiculous like that.
He can still fly and Saiyans are capable of going without breathing for some time (they are shown fighting in space with no protection), so chances are he will try to go up through the island and leave the planet altogether to figure out where he is. I'm assuming he'll be prevented somehow, so please just leave a note if there's a barrier or some other thing stopping him.
I will be limiting the external expression of his ki so that he can't just blow up the planet and move on. Call it an effect of the coral if that works. His capacity to take a hit, however, will not be reduced.
I would also like to know about Vatheon's moon if it has one and its schedule, please! <3 This has the ability to greatly affect both Vegeta's mood and possibly allow him to transform if he's up on the island.
I know DBZ is a super-OP series, and I'm definitely willing to work with the mods to make Vegeta someone who can hang around.
Just as a note on this application - I will be pulling Vegeta from BEFORE the events of DBZ to avoid some of the incredible power issues I think might be present otherwise. He's likely to grow stronger every time he gets himself beaten down since that's just how Saiyans work, but he won't be blowing up planets by farting on accident or anything ridiculous like that.
He can still fly and Saiyans are capable of going without breathing for some time (they are shown fighting in space with no protection), so chances are he will try to go up through the island and leave the planet altogether to figure out where he is. I'm assuming he'll be prevented somehow, so please just leave a note if there's a barrier or some other thing stopping him.
I will be limiting the external expression of his ki so that he can't just blow up the planet and move on. Call it an effect of the coral if that works. His capacity to take a hit, however, will not be reduced.
I would also like to know about Vatheon's moon if it has one and its schedule, please! <3 This has the ability to greatly affect both Vegeta's mood and possibly allow him to transform if he's up on the island.
I know DBZ is a super-OP series, and I'm definitely willing to work with the mods to make Vegeta someone who can hang around.
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